Another revison
This week, we had our second rewrite of the semester, using the peer feedback we received last week to help us improve our blog posts. As I’ve stated before, I find the peer review and rewrite process quite difficult, however I got along with it a bit better this week. I found it easier to put the feedback I received into my blog post. While I didn’t edit much of the text, I did add in a few new sentences here and there, and greatly changed the layout. I think the layout looks a lot better than it originally did and helps the blog to flow more clearly. I was surprised when I got 4 separate feedback comments, however I was glad to get the critique. I was able to see what I was doing right and what I could improve on. I feel more confident in my writing, since I did get some nice, positive feedback on a lot of aspects on my blog. I was also able to improve the parts of my blog that weren't so good, which I was really grateful for! Overall, I’m happy with the feedback I ...